Hello my fellow french fries!

hi, heh. doin chinese hw atm and very bored. thought i'd like to post a new story me and jess made up. r these stories actually good or something? plz can i have some feedback on weather i should continue or not.

The Leads of Romance
once upon a time there was a lead called lauren and she got inserted into a pacer that belonged to alice. inside the pacer she met another lead named Will and started talking to him. then alice was clicking for more lead because she had just finished using jessica the lead. Lauren said to Will: i'm scared, i dont want to be used up. Will said: don't worry, i'll slip in front of u so tat she uses me first. Lauren got very touched and decided tat this was the lead she'll be with for life. Alice was also very touched so she set the leads free whilst buying a box of other unknown leads so she doesnt feel guilty about using them. When Will and lauren got set free, they went to the jungle and met tarzan and jane. they were welcome to settle down with them and they lived happily ever after.